Score: 9

"Great!"

submission: System of a Down - Coffee

date: April 11, 2009

I have a hard time believing this is your "first" flash, because this was very well done! It's a well-executed, original idea. While your drawings aren't jaw-dropping they're still well done and fit the styling of the flash very well.

I'm excited to see what else you'll submit to the portal!

Score: 3

"Kudos for doing all your own work"

submission: Clown B-Ball

date: April 5, 2009

I respect that you tried to do all your own work, music included. However, nothing stands out here.

The music itself wasn't too bad. It was a bit annoying, but that can be overlooked. My major problem with the music was that it didn't seem to fit the flash.

The flash needs some considerable work too. The drawing was inconsistent and not very well done. Try adding a little more detail, and putting a little more work into the characters you draw. The lack of narration/sound-effects also detracts from your flash. I can see the actual material within the flash being funny, but it needs a little bit of polishing too.

Score: 9

"Great take on Asteroids!"

submission: Alien Annihilator

date: April 5, 2009

I really enjoyed this.

It looked and sounded great. It was all very polished. The controls were also well-done. They were very responsive; I couldn't ask for more. I also liked your take on the different difficulties. Rather than changing the frequency or AI of enemies you changed the controls of the game, which is definitely pretty unique. The only thing I would change is the length of the game. It's too short!

Score: 10

"I hope to see more!"

submission: Portal Defenders

date: March 27, 2009

Wow! What an experience. I've been playing this game for a while now and I've finally beaten the last boss! This just might be the greatest flash game that I've ever played.

Everything is top notch in this game. Controls, balance, animation, drawing, and to top it off it's a nod to both the good and bad of Newgrounds (but mostly the good). I loved every minute of playing, and I don't think I'm about to stop now that I've beaten it. Much kudos, I can only hope for more to come!

Score: 9

"Enjoyable!"

submission: Bridging the Gap 1

date: March 26, 2009

Very polished voice acting, script, and animation. I can't help but feel like there could be more, but I wouldn't fault you if you didn't change anything.

Score: 5

"Not bad"

submission: Peanut Boy

date: April 26, 2008

I liked the way this was written, however it'd be best if your script was 100% original ;). If you improve your style and voice acting I'm sure your Flashes will become much better.

Score: 6

"Good start!"

submission: Homo Erectus (pilot Ep.)

date: April 12, 2008

For your first flash, this is very good. I liked the animation style, it's pretty unique, however the quality of the video brought it down a notch. One thing you really need to work on is the sound quality. I couldn't understand what was being said because the music was too overpowering, and there was too much white noise. Work on that and I'm sure your flashes will improve greatly!

Score: 2

"It's Lacking"

submission: 'TRIS 1.1 [tetris remake]

date: November 25, 2006

When you remake a game you should improve upon it. All you did here was downgrade the graphics. Try and add something more to the game, perhaps adding different graphics, music, and gamestyles.

Score: 1

"Ignorance is not bliss"

submission: Tribute to Saddam

date: November 24, 2006

Although a lot has happened in Iraq since saddam was captured, it was for the better. I'm assuming you don't know that 100 of thousands of people were killed under saddams rule. He was a horrible military general, and killed many of his own civilians.

Your flash wasn't that good either. Pictures and text isn't something that impresses. Try and get something more interesting if your trying to prove something you believe in.

Score: 7

"Wait..."

submission: Penguin Fall

date: November 23, 2006

Your going to impress your girlfriend by killing her favorite animal?