Score: 9

"Great!"

submission: System of a Down - Coffee

date: April 11, 2009

I have a hard time believing this is your "first" flash, because this was very well done! It's a well-executed, original idea. While your drawings aren't jaw-dropping they're still well done and fit the styling of the flash very well.

I'm excited to see what else you'll submit to the portal!

Score: 3

"Kudos for doing all your own work"

submission: Clown B-Ball

date: April 5, 2009

I respect that you tried to do all your own work, music included. However, nothing stands out here.

The music itself wasn't too bad. It was a bit annoying, but that can be overlooked. My major problem with the music was that it didn't seem to fit the flash.

The flash needs some considerable work too. The drawing was inconsistent and not very well done. Try adding a little more detail, and putting a little more work into the characters you draw. The lack of narration/sound-effects also detracts from your flash. I can see the actual material within the flash being funny, but it needs a little bit of polishing too.

Score: 9

"Great take on Asteroids!"

submission: Alien Annihilator

date: April 5, 2009

I really enjoyed this.

It looked and sounded great. It was all very polished. The controls were also well-done. They were very responsive; I couldn't ask for more. I also liked your take on the different difficulties. Rather than changing the frequency or AI of enemies you changed the controls of the game, which is definitely pretty unique. The only thing I would change is the length of the game. It's too short!

Score: 2

"Needs Some Serious Work"

submission: -Zelda Theme-

date: November 21, 2006

You played at an offbeat tempo, and it doesn't sound very good. It basically sounds like you pushed each note with your index finger, which you probably did. The single notes aren't appealing at all. You should try playing with a bass and melody, as well as add some chords to your song.